Some people claim that children should play more traditional games than modern ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree

It is irrefutable that, these days, the increasing number of children

are being involved

Suggestion

is being involved

in various types of both modern and traditional games. The majority of youngsters have a play station set in their bedroom and some even download their favourite games on their mobile phones and PCs. Some people suppose that, there are more positives of traditional games than modern ones for young generation, due to the factors like

nurture

Suggestion

to nurture

and education.

However I

Accept comma addition

However, I

partly disagree with

this

idea and in

this

essay I will support my view with examples. On the one hand, there are several benefits of modern games.

Firstly

, these up to date games not only demonstrate the scenes with violence or crime, but

also

they might be educational as well as informative, which can play vitally important role

on

Suggestion

in

children’s behaviour and attention towards the life. What I mean by

this

is that, Currently, computer programmers realized that new games should not be just a waste of time for children, they must be able to teach our youth for different abilities, that might be extremely useful for their future perspectives.

Secondly

, some modern educational games, which usually require quite a little amount of money, have a great deal of significant awards, including schooling privileges, scholarships and so on. Take

pupils

Accept comma addition

pupils, for

for example

. Participating in these games they are likely to gain a great experience or qualification, which can open the door for better employment.

Moreover

, they may earn some money being a winner and motivated for a better

results

Suggestion

result

.

On the other hand

, there is an argument that we have to maintain our different cultural identities.

In other words

, every

people

Suggestion

person

throughout the world ought not to forger his traditional customs and games, in order not to be unfamiliar with their own cultural backgrounds. Summing up,

although

it is a common belief that traditional games are more beneficial than modern ones, I personally feel that modern games are becoming more useful, whereas

traditionals

consisting of or derived from tradition

traditional

traditions

might be unnecessary in the majority of cases.