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A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children's sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public. Write a letter to the company. In your letter • describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team • summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts • say how you think the company should spend the money

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you regarding your recent and amazing social responsibility campaign in the downtown district, as it has grabbed my attention. Relevantly, I believe that it is part of my responsibility as a citizen to participate in your survey and highlight why there are benefits for each of the options that you have mentioned in your advertisement.
Firstly
, I believe that sponsoring a sport that depends on
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group work is a strong statement for the youth, as it allows them to recognize the positive outcome of cooperation.
Moreover
, it improves their communication skills.
On the other hand
, I think
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there are many benefits of supporting local
music
 events. Specifically, I believe that
music
 is a crucial cultural element that influences and shapes our thinking, mood, and our approach towards life. As well,
music
 has been part of what makes us more capable to endure our daily routine.
Accordingly
, for all the reasons that
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 me into
music
, I truly believe that supporting outdoor musicals
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 is a good idea to start
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 your CSR campaign. Thank you. Yours Sincerely, Mohamed Hawas

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

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