In many countries it is now illegal to smoke in public places. It is only fair that people who wish to smoke should have to leave the building. Do you agree or disagree?

#countries #smoke #places #people

It is an irrefutable that now a day, The trend of the smoking among people

are increasing

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is increasing

rapidly. Some people assert that the smoking is not good for health and it should not be allowed to

smoke

in public areas. In my opinion, I totally agree with the statement and in

this

essay, I intend to support my views before conclusion can be drawn. There are several

reason

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reasons

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for

this

. The

first

and foremost is that the smoking is injurious to the health, but there is no doubt, the smoking in-front of other folks is

also

has

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having

the same

affects

property of a personal character that is portable but not used in business

effects

as active smokers. For an instance, According to the survey, 70 percent of The Cancer problems caused by the visible vapours and 50 percent of the passive person

has

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have

same health issues

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the same health issues

such

as breathing, stomach which is found in the active smokers.

On the contrary

side, To reduce the bad impact of the smoking, The

cigarettes

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cigarette

companies introduce the alternate option

that is

vaping

the process of shedding tears (usually accompanied by sobs or other inarticulate sounds)

weeping

. In a research found that the

vaping

material used to pave an area

paving

warping

is less harmful as

compare

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compared

comparison

to cigarettes.

Moreover

, other side The Government

give

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gives

fines for the smokers who

smoke

in public space.

In addition

Also

Request to the building contractors to install the

smoke

detector in each building and defined designated area for smokers. To put in a nutshell, I pen down and say that it is better to encourage everyone and aware not to

smoke

in public areas,

instead

of putting someone’s life in danger zone.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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9Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

249 words

4.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

secondhand smoke
respiratory problems
cardiovascular disease
clean air
public health
hospital admissions
economic benefits
smoking cessation
cultural shift
healthcare costs
smoke-free laws
enforcement
designated smoking areas
compliance
social attitudes

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In many countries it is now illegal to smoke in public places. It is only fair that people who wish to smoke should have to leave the building. Do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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