some people get into debt by buying things they don't need and can't afford.what are the reasons for this behavior?what action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 250 words atleast.
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first
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amount
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the loan
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money
two times more than the principal Suggestion
the money
amount
over five years.
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bank
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