The bar chart below shows the number of hours each teacherspent teaching in different schools in four different countries in 2001.
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2001.
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schools
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works the longest compared to the other three countries.
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school
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teachers
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work
for about 900 Use synonyms
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USA
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about 750 Use synonyms
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teachers
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