Some believe that tourism does more to create tension between between countries rather than helping individuals better understand other cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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tourism

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is the most crucial resource to raise and develop the economy of a country, so

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hand, some

people believe that

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does create tension between the countries rather helping the individuals better understand other cultures. And

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disagree it

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disagree with it

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, the means of the

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is a main source of income

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, the way of attracting visitors to visit and explore the different types of cultures all around the world. There are thousands of different kinds of cultures and traditions even practiced till day since the ages and the heritages of one's nation are still preserved in the same way for the people on the globe to come and amuse themselves by the phenomenal presence of these heritages.

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, some of individuals during their visit to the countries experience a little low from local public because of the scams by the locals which is

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the reason of creating tension between the countries, as the local authorities work on these crimes and follow the law and order to control over these.

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conclusion the

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is very important for every country to increase the income and the friendly relationship with the countries by

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. The tension creating by some local crimes can be overcome by the security, law and order

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the price control, which will facilitate the foreigners to come and understand the country's culture and traditions