Some people think that students in high school should study music as a compulsory school subject. Others believe that such a requirement would be a waste of valuable school study time. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, studying
music
is becoming increasingly popular. Although
some people believe that the music
should be a part of the student's curriculum, others think that it is a waste of time
. This
essay will discuss why studying music
is a beneficial thing for the human's soul, despite being a waste of time
. As well as, provide evidence as to why benefits overweigh drawbacks.
Studying music
has beneficial effects on human's soul. It, from the past until now, teaches human beings to be quiet and relaxed. Moreover
, it enriches their soul with good morals, values and manners. In fact, there is a recent study has done on two groups of children: the first
one study music
during their courses and the other group do not. This
research has concluded the first
group of children is more quiet and calm than the Second
one. For these reasons, studying music
plays a crucial role in students' lives.
While studying music
has many advantages, it has many disadvantages, as it wastes a lot of time
. Students prefer listening to music
instead
of doing their homework. Furthermore
, it will avoid them from studying their main subjects such
as: Math, Geography, and Biology. For example
, if everyone keen on studying music
, there will be no doctors or engineers in the future. Therefore
, making music
a part of students' courses is a time
wasting.
In conclusion, whether or not, studying music
is an argumentative issue. Even though, some people think that it should be a compulsory school subject, others say that is
a waste of valuable school study time
. From my point of view, After thorough analysis on this
subject, it is predicted that the positive effects of the debate over studying music
will always be greater than the adverse effects, and because of this
, music
will be a compulsory subject.Submitted by dentamratef on
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