The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Sumarise the information by selecting and reporting the main eatures, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph elucidates the segment of four different materials from the 1982 to 2010 period in
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country
.
In 1982,only 0% of Change to a plural noun
countries
aluminium
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the aluminium
can
were recycled. Correct subject-verb agreement
cans
Thus
, in 2010 this
rate
reache
a peak of 45% and Correct your spelling
reached
reaches
reach
similarly
, only 0% of plastic recycling in 1982 instead
of there is littel
increased Correct your spelling
little
into
9% in 2010.
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to
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, paper and carboard
have Correct your spelling
cardboard
highest
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the highest
rate
in 1982. It have
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has
62
% Correct article usage
a 62
rate
and in 2010 it grew into
70%.
The Change preposition
to
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, glass containers are the second
higher in 1982 with the
50% percentage and raise Correct article usage
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into
60% in 2010.
To recapitulate, aluminium cans grow Change preposition
to
than
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more than
the
others Correct article usage
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have
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at have
stagnant
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a stagnant
rate
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