The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Sumarise the information by selecting and reporting the main eatures, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.

Sumarise the information by selecting and reporting the main eatures, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph elucidates the segment of four different materials from the 1982 to 2010 period in
a
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several
country
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. In 1982,only 0% of
aluminium
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the aluminium
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can
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cans
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were recycled.
Thus
, in 2010
this
rate
reache
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reached
reaches
reach
a peak of 45% and
similarly
, only 0% of plastic recycling in 1982
instead
of there is
littel
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little
increased
into
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9% in 2010.
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, paper and
carboard
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cardboard
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have
highest
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rate
in 1982. It
have
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62
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%
rate
and in 2010 it grew
into
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70%. The
last
, glass containers are the
second
higher in 1982 with
the
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50% percentage and raise
into
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to
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60% in 2010. To recapitulate, aluminium cans grow
than
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more than
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the
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others
have
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at have
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stagnant
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a stagnant
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rate
.

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