Some people think secondary school students should study international news as one of their subjects. Other people say this is a waste of valuable school time. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Due to advancement in IT, we do not belong to a big plant earth; we belong to a small global village. Where everything is well connected and so, international news as a
subject
come under a debatable question. So, people are divided on the issue of whether students should study international news or whether it is off the mark in secondary school curriculum. Personally, I side with the latter view.
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would enrich their experience and broaden their horizon. From the news of any part of the Linking Words
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could motivate them to do something for their own country, if they are lagging behind or even help other nations by volunteering to help. Linking Words
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, ‘international news’ would have and ever-changing syllabus and so would be practically impossible to introduce as a Linking Words
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, in the pluralistic society of today, some news may hurt the sentiments of any particular section of people and might all hell broke loose.
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However
, steps should not be taken by secondary schools to keep students abreast of what is happening around the Linking Words
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This
would keep students up to date without having tension of memorizing things.
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