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The table below gives information about languages with the most native speakers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about languages with the most native speakers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table tells about the
number
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 of native people who speak six different languages
as well as
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 the ones speaking them as an additional
language
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. A remarkable feature of the table is the total
number
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 of
Mandarin
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Chinese
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speakers
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 which clearly
outnumber
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 the rest of the fellow
speakers
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.
Firstly
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, it is visible that
Mandarin
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Chinese
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 is the most spoken
language
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 with around 900
million
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 native
speakers
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. The quantity is way lesser for the other languages and roughly ranges between 200-400
million
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.
However
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, the trend is entirely different when it comes to opting for them as an additional
language
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 because English is the most
favorite
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 additional one with around 603
million
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 people.
This
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number
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 falls to 190
million
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 for
Mandarin
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Chinese
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 and
further
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 to 120
million
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 for Hindi
whereas
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 the least preferred additional
language
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 is Portuguese (10
million
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).
Therefore
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, it can be concluded that the total
number
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 of
speakers
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for
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Mandarin
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Chinese
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 reaches a value of about 1 billion, which is strikingly high compared to other languages with the least spoken one being Portuguese.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, language, mandarin, chinese, speakers, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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