Art classes, such as painting and drawing, are as important for children's development as other subjects, so it should be compulsory in high school. Do you agree or disagree?
Art how school subject, could be much useful in education, it should
be have
the same significance as Mathematics or Science or English, behave in a certain manner; show a certain behavior; conduct or comport oneself
behave
therefore
, Art classes should be considered as subjects in high school. I think that activities with there could be develop creativity are highly important for all life skills, nevertheless
I think that, at a certain moment in life, a person should choosing
if art could be a profession or a hobby, Suggestion
choose
therefore
, it would beSubmitted by wertiko on
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