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Some people say that the Internet is bringing people together by making the world smaller. To what extent do you agree that the Internet is making it easier for people to communicate with one another?

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These days internet is very popular amongst all the age group. The rapid growth of Social media apps is the main key people are connected to each other and they feel very close to our love once. In my opinion Technology helps individuals to connect with their Families, friends, and their close ones. There are numbers of apps which help their users to communicate, and to make video calls. With
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 applications person can stay near to their family. In earlier time people used to send letters to each other it was expensive method or as well as time consuming, but due to technology advancement now we can send mail, message in just few seconds.
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 introduce a text messaging service which helps individual to send free text to anyone, latter they introduce video chat service, by
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 features suppose I am seating in Canada and my relatives are in India I can talk to my family in just one click without spending any extra money. In Conclusion I believe internet really helps people to connect with each other more efficiently.
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