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IELTS Writing Task 2 Topics: Number 4. Nowadays media should include more good news in their publications. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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It is so obvious that
media
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the media
has
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have
 an important impact in today’s life and the ways they publicize a news should be mindful to correctly reflect the reality and accurate information. I am agreeing that
media
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the media
 should focus more on good news and I will explain the reasons in the following paragraphs. Media is the fastest source of communications and publications of a news. When it is publicizing through a famous channel or radios than people do not afraid that the news can be gossip. They relay in the source and it can affect the audience
accordingly
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. For stance, if a TV announces that a dangerous virus recognized among the nations and it can feed up the survivor within 24 hours, people will be trembled. So, for
such
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 kind of news it is good to be careful and
accurate rather
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accurate, rather
 than ignore the news or present it carelessly.
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, media should not always focus on the negative part of a social existing
problems
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problem
 or undue news to create conflict among the nations or different level of a society. They should act independently and always behave neutral against the sensitive subjects that can be a serious issue for the civilian.
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Instead they
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Instead, they
 can broadcast more good news to contribute the success and development of their country by consisting the peace and patriotism. Media have an excellent impact in the attitude change of audiences. So as much good news includes in the publication the good result will be impacted. At the end,
media
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the media
 has
important role
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an important role
 for publicising a trustful information and they have eminence impact on the behaviours of audiences, so it is
necessity
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necessary
 to consider more good news in their broadcasting.

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