Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, cloths and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individual who only think about their own wishes. other people believe that it is important for children to make decision about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Some people think, giving freedom to kind for selecting daily needs
such
as food, cloths and entertainment source makes them selfish. They don'
t
think of the other. While other people's thinking by doing so we make them independent and its important aspect. In my opinion, we should give kids freedom to
choice
their matters as its make them independent and strong, but are given
this
freedom in some extend not totally. By allowing children to
choice
their basic necessity makes them
decision
makers. They don'
t
rely on another for their basic need. But all these things should be done is some limit. As a
kids
Suggestion
kid
they don'
t
understand bad or good about themselves. If we allow them total to take decisions without interference, they might take wrong decisions for themselves. As a kid they have less
experiance
the accumulation of knowledge or skill that results from direct participation in events or activities
experience
in life. They don'
t
know what food is good for them and what are bad. They don'
t
know which entertainment source could take them to a right path or which to a wrong. They have less
anayls
(computer science) a system of world-wide electronic communication in which a computer user can compose a message at one terminal that can be regenerated at the recipient's terminal when the recipient logs in
emails
power, so we should not allow them completely
to decised
Suggestion
to decide
to decided
what to do
amd
in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go
and
make them bring selfish attitude in them.
For example
, Parent's always suggest their
childern
a young person of either sex
children
to watch certain TV show to increase their knowledge.
This
thing is not force but
care
Suggestion
the care
of parent's towards their
child
. But
its
it is
it's
not good
to always interfer
Suggestion
always interfering
to always interfere
to always interfered
to always interferes
in
Suggestion
with
your
child
decision
of
choice
. Respect their
choice
also
and don'
t
force them to do certain things. Don'
t
make your
child
depend on you totally, let them be independent. Let them
tak
carry out
take
talk
their won
decision
, you only play a
supporter
Suggestion
supporting
supportive
role of guiding your
child
. Try to understand children mind
also
.
THis
Suggestion
This
is
also
important for making your
child
strong. I
concude
decide by reasoning; draw or come to a conclusion
conclude
concede
concluded
, my opinion about
this
is neutral. I agree that
child
Suggestion
children
the child
a child
should become independent, they should allow to select their
choice
of food, clothes
etcbut
this
should not
completly
to a complete degree or to the full or entire extent
completely
. As a
child
they have low understanding level. They might spoil
themself
reflexive form of "them"
themselves
by taking wrong
Suggestion
by taking a wrong
decision
or
followinng
about to be mentioned or specified
following
wrong attitude.

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