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Spoken communication is more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#communication
Verbal
communication
 certainly makes the subject matter more appealing than written
communication
.I
,
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,
agree with the given point of view and would like to list down some
points regarding to
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points regarding
 my belief and
also
 list down some contradictory arguments which people in the society might carry.
To Begin
 with
,
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,
verbal
communication
 is the best mode of promoting
one
's idea/interest.These
days many
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days, many
 people are not much interested in any written literature
instead
,
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,
they want an interactive
communication
such
 as spoken
communication
.
For example
,
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,
these days people are more interested in movies which are adapted from a popular novel and not keen enough to read
one
. Another reason for my notion comes from the fact that spoken
communication
 is not widely used for its ease of
use but
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use, but
 it
also
 helps in identifying
one
's personality and
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
.
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Through
 it.Whereas
,
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,
in
written
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writing
 mode of
communication
one
cannnot
can not
cannot
 get much familiarity of others opinion.For illustration
,
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,
it would be quite difficult for the audience to judge the individual on
basis
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the basis
 of their writing only.
On the contrary
,
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,
many times in verbal
communication
 some actions would result in
miscommunication
 among public.In written
communication
 the intention of the statement is generally clear.
Secondly
,
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,
spoken
communication
 don't guarantee to get intended message to others. To conclude
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,
there indeed are some people believe that
written form
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the written form
 of
communication
 is better than other modes and they have every right to back their opinion.
However
,
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,
I
,
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,
am of the opinion that spoken mode of
communication
 is widely used as it informs people about the matter in
a
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an
 interactive manner.

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