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Driving a car is the best mode of transport To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons and examples from your own experience. Write about 250 words.

#car #mode #transport
Some peoples think that going on a road by
car
 is the greatest thing to do. In my mind using a
car
 for transportation is not a good thing.
Firstly
,
Car
 can cost a lot of
money
. You have to pay a lot of
money
 to buy a
car
 that it can be really expensive.
Also
, you have to take care of it which meant you have to spend more
money
 for checking services or repairing services. To drive a
car
 you have to pay for fuels, and
also
 pay tax.
These
Suggestion
This
 meant using a
car
 as your transportation
is cost
Suggestion
is costing
costs
 more
money
 than
other choice
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the other choice
other choices
 of
transport
.
This
 is shown, if you chose
llike
prefer or wish to do something
like
public bus
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a public bus
public buses
for
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to
transport
 you will pay less
money
.
Secondly
, Driving a
car
 can provide
air
 pollution.
Car's engine
Suggestion
The car's engine
produce
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produces
 smoke which can make
air
Suggestion
the air
 dirty and cause climate change. For examples, the smoke from the engine contain some bad gas like carbon
dioxide which
Accept comma addition
dioxide, which
 is a kind gas that pollute the
air
, and
also
 make people can not breath well because there are no fresh
air
, and it
effects
have an effect upon
affects
peoples
Suggestion
people's
 health, like lung problems, and even cause cancer. To sum up, Driving a
car
 can cause
air
 pollution, spend much
money
, and
also
effects
have an effect upon
affects
 health.
This
 is meant driving a
car
 for
transport
 is not a good thing. For
recommentation
something (as a course of action) that is recommended as advisable
recommendations
recommendation
, you should use public
transport
 or cycling to reduce payment and
air
 pollution.

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