today more an more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as the sahara desert or the antartic. what are the benefits and disadvantages for tourist to visit such places?

Over recent year,
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
became easier and most of people planning to visit new countries in their vacations, some of them like adventures and exploring places extraordinary with difficult conditions, I strongly believe that it's
great adventure
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a great adventure
despite the
emergencies
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emergency
situations that maybe we face it. I will discuss the cons and pros for
this
phenomenon.
First
and
formost
ranking above all others
foremost
, the world becomes smaller with
this
revolution of technology,
consequently
we can chat with others from different
cities
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cities, although the
although
the big distance between us, so we can see pictures in Facebook and
instagram
for beautiful monuments and learn about
this
placed and understand
culture
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the culture
and history
even musuems and
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museums and even
even museums and
cultural events without costing money and bother the travel.
In addition
to
this
, the curiosity and love of renewal for physically capable people lead to travel to different situations and trying new experiences out of the ordinary
such
as
sahara
the world's largest desert (3,500,000 square miles) in northern Africa
Sahara
desert or
antartic
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Antartic
enteritis
. While
this
can bring happiness and satisfying for tourists,
also
raising the level of adrenaline. What is crucial is the safety and security for tourists,
this
can lead to dangerous situations and harm during exploration, add to that the
excistence
the state or fact of existing
existence
of dangerous
animals and
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animals, and
poisonous plants we may be exposed
also
the conditions of foods and hotels it will not be on high quality because its not famous touristic places.
another
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Another
drawback is the different weather conditions and the virus that may cause. To sum up, happiness is about discovering new and unusual things and
places but
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places, but
most important is staying safe and taking care of our life and take adequate precautions for
this
kind of trip.
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