Families who do not send their children to government-financed schools should not be required to pay taxes that support universal education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answers, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
For some groups of peoples who do not let
thier
kids to attend public schools, they do not have to spend of them or themselves
their
money
on education
system
which provide the learning program for the whole country
. In my opinion, every family has to give supports for their country
's education
system
, even they did not take their kids to study in public school
.
Firstly
, Education
is for everyone in the country
. every
person has right to take Suggestion
Every
course
at Suggestion
courses
school
, and exspecailly
in public to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
school which
provided free teaching service to the communities. As the knowledge is really important thing, the government take care of it a lot. They spend a lot of Accept comma addition
school, which
money
to support
their education
system
, and also
their residences have duty
to care about Suggestion
a duty
the duty
this
too, because all the money
came from taxes provides by them. In most country
all families have to send their Suggestion
countries
childrens
to a young person of either sex
children
school
, without costing anythings
. an indefinite thing
anything
Expecailly
, for poor peoples who do not have enough Suggestion
Especially
money
to pay for private school
they need to bring their kids to publics
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public
school
, so they can get eduaction
too. Suggestion
educated
education
addiction
This
is shown, if a family do not bring
their kids to Suggestion
does not bring
publics
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public
school
they still have to pay taxes to support
their country
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country's
education
system
,
and Accept space
,
also
the government have rule
for families to send kids to study. Suggestion
ruled
Education
is important which we have to support
, even we think, we did not use its service.
Secondly
, It is a duty for everyone to pay taxes to support
their country
, not only education
but the whole things in their country
. They have to give support
for education
, because it bring
the new generation of Suggestion
brings
youth which
they will be Accept comma addition
youth, which
next
country
leader, and also
to have a good quality education
we need a highly support
to improve the system
. For examples, if some families which do not bring their kids to learn from government
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the government system
a government system
government systems
system
, they still pay their taxes as a duty for them, and all the incomes will b
used to help poor peoples who need have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
be
education
since they can not
afford private classes.
In conclusion, All families have to pay their taxes to can not
cannot
support
education
system
, even thought they do not take
their kids to Suggestion
did not take
were not taking
schools
. As every Suggestion
school
kids
has opportunities to learn they must be sent to study at Suggestion
kid
school
, in public school
, or even private school
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