More and more companies allow their employees to work from home or “remotely” rather than going into an office each day. Do the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages?

Because of the rapid expansion of
world wide web
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the world wide web
, many kinds of tasks are possible to execute from
distance
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a distance
.
This
huge
facilities
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facility
are attracting
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is attracting
a large number of companies to provide the option for their workers to do their job without attending the workplace.
Although
it has a few drawbacks, the positive outcomes outnumber those drawbacks. The
first
benefit is
the less waste
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the least waste
of time.
For
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In
the corporate world, time is money. But nowadays traffic condition of many
metropolitons
relating to or characteristic of a metropolis
metropolitan
metropolitans
are
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is
the
bigest
above average in size or number or quantity or magnitude or extent
biggest
obstracle
something immaterial that stands in the way and must be circumvented or surmounted
obstacle
for the companies. A lot of valuable
times
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time
are being spent
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is being spent
on the road. And it
also
hampared
prevent the progress or free movement of
hampered
the employee's mental health, which plays a very vital role in the overall growth.
This
remote work option has the ability to solve
this
problem. The
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
important aspect is the reduction of the wages of the workers.
Todays
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Today's
employers has the option to
recruite
register formally as a participant or member
recruit
people from many
others developing
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others, developing
countries with a very
competetive
involving competition or competitiveness
competitive
sallary
something that remunerates
salary
. Not only that, because of the huge reduction of the
expendature
money paid out; an amount spent
expenditure
; companies have the scope to
recruite
register formally as a participant or member
recruit
more workers for a task. Which gives a big boost to that particular work.
As a result
, they are able to complete the task at least possible time. An another plus point is that more people in an industry
means
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mean
more possibilities of innovations. But all
this
plural of "this"
these
advantages
doesn't means
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doesn't mean
that there is no disadvantage. The biggest concern of
this
policy is the dependence on the internet. If the internet faces any
disfunctions
(medicine) any disturbance in the functioning of an organ or body part or a disturbance in the functioning of a social group
dysfunctions
dysfunction
, the disconnection from the workers can
causes
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cause
a massive
dissaster
a state of extreme (usually irremediable) ruin and misfortune
disaster
to any related industry. It is
also
very difficult for the companies to
controll
power to direct or determine
control
their employees. Do companies need to be afraid of those negative consequences? The answer is no. Every
changes
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change
bring
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brings
new risks. But those who can able to
adopt
make fit for, or change to suit a new purpose
adapt
with
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to
these changes, are more likely to succeed. But they must be aware of those
negetive
characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features
negative
aspects and should consider them while future planning.

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