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Many people join distance-learning programmes (study material, post, TV, Internet) and study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the same benefit as attending colleges or universities does.

#people #programmes #study #post #tv #internet #home #benefit #colleges #universities
There is no doubt that these
days
Suggestion
day
education
 is very essential part of our life and thanks to the technological advancement multiple choices
education
 system are available in the present
,
Accept space
,
 and surely the online
education
 is one of these options
,
Accept space
,
however
 the question
de
engage in
do
 you believe in
this
kind
 of
education
? Is a controversial question and has no simple answer, in
this
 essay I will examine
this
 phenomenon and review the both viewpoint and conclude with my personal perspective On one side of the argument there are many peoples who argue that
this
kind
 of
education
 is
considerably waste
Suggestion
a considerable waste
considerable waste
 of personal resources. The main reason for
this
 believe is the advertisement circulated on the social media and the internet of guaranteed certificates from universities around the world once you pay the fees complete , regardless of the credibility of
this
 news and whether it is real or a
kind
 of fraud from hackers , but
this
kind
 of news would make any one think twice about the on line
education
On the other hand
 the supports of
this
 view argue that
this
kind
 of
education
 is cheaper and more flexible than the traditional courses

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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Summary
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • flexibility
  • convenience
  • accessibility
  • independence
  • communication
  • interaction
  • academic resources
  • extracurricular activities
  • hands-on experience
  • peer support
  • time management
  • procrastination
  • motivation
  • feedback
  • structured learning environment
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