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More and more people today are drinking sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons for these and what are the solutions?

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Food choice of a person has been drastically changed as the times spends. People prefer to
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 sugar-based drinks because of various reasons, including
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 and appearance. There are solutions which create awareness to avoid drinks, including providing the better option and to prevent the health issues.
To begin
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 with, Number of people has been started to
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, which contain high sugar level. One of the important reasons is that
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 of
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 drinks is delicious.
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 type of product cannot be avoided by the foodie people as they like to try a different type of
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 in their routine life.
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, in recent times the younger one visit to various café containing a
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, which was a combination of various fruit pulps and chocolates.
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, some of the restaurant represents these drinks in an innovative manner
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, they attract more people towards to try
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 things.
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, use of
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 drinks is increasing; having different
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 and looks.
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, there are some steps has been taken by the individuals to avoid the excessive use of
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 drinks.
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,
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 should be avoided by introducing new drinks having good taste, but which contains less sugar.
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 will help to boost the energy of the person.
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, research conducted shows that lemon water helps to make a person feel fresh, even helps to body which provides certain minerals.
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, Having the frequent access of
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 drinks invites health issues
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 as, diabetes, increased blood pressure. The government should start an awareness program to show the impact of
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. In conclusion, most of the people like to
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 the different food and appearance as; start to
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 which contains high sugar. To control these access government should create another option
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 create awareness of its effect on the health.

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