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Some people thinks that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what do you agree or disagree?

#people #climate #change
It is true that
climate
change
 has become a serious human issue, because of it is a major threat to life on Earth, but some people argue that we need accept it, as opposed to try to address with
this
 problem. I do not give the seal of approval with above mentioned opinion, because I believe that human can impact on the Earth’s
climate
. On the one hand, there are various measures that government and individuals could take to prevent or at least mitigate
climate
change
. The government should introduce some tangible beneficially laws about the main reasons which prompting to
climate
change
.
Firstly
, they can impose “green taxes” on drivers, manufacturing companies that have an adverse effect on air with polluters.
Secondly
, they could invest in renewable energy production from solar, wind or water power.
Additionally
, as individuals, we should
also
 try to impact our positive contribution to
climate
change
, by becoming more energy efficient, by more using bicycle rather than transport.
Finally
, Voting for politicians who propose to tackle
this
 problem is a good example of preventing
climate
change
 by the public.
On the other hand
, if we continue to be indifferent to
climate
change
, human will be faced miserable consequences. Mountain landslide which could have determined by specialist in New Zealand,
for example
, is prompted several disastrous. Several of people are injured and diet. Most of them lost their homes and forced to migrate to nearby cities or other countries.
Also
,
this
 will be lead to some outbreak of diseases and famine, increased homelessness in the country. In conclusion, I believe that the government and individuals can find ways to solve
climate
change
 related problem.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • climate change
  • prevent
  • adaptation
  • mitigation
  • cope with
  • effects
  • shift
  • mindset
  • lifestyle
  • balance
  • invest
  • research
  • technology
  • crucial
  • education
  • awareness
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