Television has had a significant influence on the culture of many societies. To what extent would you say that television has positively or negatively affected the cultural development of your society?

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The technology has spread its legs to every nook and corner of the world. There are numbers of channels available on the

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television which

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television, which

give you essential knowledge as well as put impact on every

human’s

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human

life.

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camp of society thinks that

television

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influences to a culture of communities.

according

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to my point of view,

television

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affects the cultural development of society in both positive and negative

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ways

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essay. The

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and foremost positive impact of

television

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spreads encourages in numbers of society about cultural events celebration.

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, nowadays the events which are related to cultures are celebrating as well as presenting in a good way on different

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levels, such

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as on

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a state level

the state level

or on broadcast on

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through nation channel of a nation. As affected by

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activity and they

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start their cultural

fests

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guests

rests

feasts

on the local

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level, such

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as in their towns and in villages.

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entire activity brings and their traditional culture. To add to it, through

television

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persons can

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present information about their own cultures to the other people who perhaps lives in the distinct parts of the globe. By

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, all

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worlds

can know about all cultures and traditions. On the contrast,

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puts a bad impact on the members of a community. It is inevitable that presentations related to several cultures and customs broadcast on

television

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through different channels, So all human beings watch these acts.

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they just want to become like alien masses and adopt foreign customs, traditional cultural activities and so on.

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a result, they forget their own cultural and indulge in another tradition. To conclude, every coin has two sides. If

television

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spreads information about cultures to increase their development,

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can become a great cause of a precious culture is death. I believe

television

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ought to present only that

events

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event

which might be proved fruitful for

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the development

of all cultures.

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Television has had a significant influence on the culture of many societies. To what extent would you say that television has positively or negatively affected the cultural development of your society?

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