Television has had a significant influence on the culture of many societies. To what extent would you say that television has positively or negatively affected the cultural development of your society?

The technology has spread its legs to every nook and corner of the world. There are numbers of channels available on the
television which
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television, which
give you essential knowledge as well as put impact on every
human’s
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human
life.
a
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A
camp of society thinks that
television
influences to a culture of communities.
according
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According
to my point of view,
television
affects the cultural development of society in both positive and negative
way
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ways
. I will elaborate it in the following paragraphs of
this
essay. The
first
and foremost positive impact of
television
spreads encourages in numbers of society about cultural events celebration.
In other words
, nowadays the events which are related to cultures are celebrating as well as presenting in a good way on different
levels
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levels, such
such
as on
state level
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a state level
the state level
or on broadcast on
television
through nation channel of a nation. As affected by
this
activity and they
also
start their cultural
fests
a visitor to whom hospitality is extended
guests
rests
feasts
on the local
level
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level, such
such
as in their towns and in villages.
This
entire activity brings and their traditional culture. To add to it, through
television
persons can
also
present information about their own cultures to the other people who perhaps lives in the distinct parts of the globe. By
this
, all
world
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worlds
can know about all cultures and traditions. On the contrast,
television
also
puts a bad impact on the members of a community. It is inevitable that presentations related to several cultures and customs broadcast on
television
through different channels, So all human beings watch these acts.
Then
they just want to become like alien masses and adopt foreign customs, traditional cultural activities and so on.
as
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As
a result, they forget their own cultural and indulge in another tradition. To conclude, every coin has two sides. If
television
spreads information about cultures to increase their development,
then
it
also
can become a great cause of a precious culture is death. I believe
television
ought to present only that
events
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event
which might be proved fruitful for
development
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the development
of all cultures.
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