Television has had a significant influence on the culture of many societies. To what extent would you say that television has positively or negatively affected the cultural development of your society?
The technology has spread its legs to every nook and corner of the world. There are numbers of channels available on the
television which
give you essential knowledge as well as put impact on every Accept comma addition
television, which
human’s
life. Suggestion
human
a
camp of society thinks that Suggestion
A
television
influences to a culture of communities. according
to my point of view, Suggestion
According
television
affects the cultural development of society in both positive and negative way
. I will elaborate it in the following paragraphs of Suggestion
ways
this
essay.
The first
and foremost positive impact of television
spreads encourages in numbers of society about cultural events celebration. In other words
, nowadays the events which are related to cultures are celebrating as well as presenting in a good way on different levels
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levels, such
such
as on state level
or on broadcast on Suggestion
a state level
the state level
television
through nation channel of a nation. As affected by this
activity and they also
start their cultural fests
on the local a visitor to whom hospitality is extended
guests
rests
feasts
level
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level, such
such
as in their towns and in villages. This
entire activity brings and their traditional culture. To add to it, through television
persons can also
present information about their own cultures to the other people who perhaps lives in the distinct parts of the globe. By this
, all world
can know about all cultures and traditions.
On the contrast, Suggestion
worlds
television
also
puts a bad impact on the members of a community. It is inevitable that presentations related to several cultures and customs broadcast on television
through different channels, So all human beings watch these acts. Then
they just want to become like alien masses and adopt foreign customs, traditional cultural activities and so on. as
a result, they forget their own cultural and indulge in another tradition.
To conclude, every coin has two sides. If Suggestion
As
television
spreads information about cultures to increase their development, then
it also
can become a great cause of a precious culture is death. I believe television
ought to present only that events
which might be proved fruitful for Suggestion
event
development
of all cultures.Suggestion
the development
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