Some people believe government should spend money on building train and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think that building more and wider roads is the better way to reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Traffic has become a serious issue in metro cities due to a large number of vehicles on road, migrants migrating, for better opportunities

such

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as job and education.

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, due poor conditions of road having potholes and narrow roads. Some people opine that the government should spend some amount of revenue on railways and constructing subways to eliminate traffic congestion while, others say that building wider roads is best solution to reduce the traffic. I personally agree, with the former view as it will not only reduce Air pollution but

also

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traffic. On the one side, developing railway line and metros is the best way to improve public

infrustructure

the basic structure or features of a system or organization

infrastructure

infrastructures

and encourage people to

use them which,

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use them, which

will reduce the motorcars on the roads.

Migrant

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A migrant

from rural areas travel to urban areas for better quality of life and to earn for their living by using the government facilities it will help them reduce the cost of travelling.

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in the united

nation people

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nation, people

prefer to travel

buy

Used in specifying adjacent dimensions

trains and subways because of good facilities provided to public.

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, building ring roads and flyover will reduce the congestion on

road

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the road

roads

people

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person

will be less frustrated while

traveling

the act of going from one place to another

travelling

to work when they have important work

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ring roads will

connect many other

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connect with many other

connect to many other

roads

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Moreover

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, seprate lane for ambulance should be build to saves life of an innociant

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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228 words

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