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In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them.what are some of the advantages and disadvantages of renting homes ?

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It is undeniable that home depicts our lifestyle.In few nations people opt to be as
tenants rather
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tenants, rather
 than being landlords.In
this
 essay
,
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,
 I will discuss both merits and demerits of living in
rented house
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a rented house
. There is no doubt that buying house is considered as an excellent investment option, provided that the price would surge in
future
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the future
.
For instance
, purchasing a flat in the heart of the city is beneficial as it is mostly well connected to rest of the places via road or metro facilities.
Also
, the owners can renovate or decorate as per their needs to ameliorate their living, which is not the case when being as tenants.
However
, there are still many advantages of living
for
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in
 a rent. People can downsize when there is money shortage.
In addition
 to that, they can easily relocate so they live in near proximity to their work area.
For example
, it is preferred to reside close to job location, rather than travelling a long way from own house to
office
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the office
 which
finally
 leaves employees exhausted as they physically strain.
In addition
 to that repair and maintenance are at landlord's risk and people who rent their homes are unaffected by the plethora of the building cost. To conclude,
although
 purchasing a home aids for future savings, it
come
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comes
 with the drawback of mortgage loans with financial institutions if not affordable.
On the other hand
 people who live
for
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in
 rent always have an opinion to choose their home based on their
requirements but
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requirements, but
 they may be asked to vacate by the owners if situation demands.

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