Why do you think social skills are now being emphasized by companies during the recruitment process? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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While hiring employees, companies now put emphasis on social skills
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Social skills like communication skills, interpersonal relationships, conflict management and empathy are essentially required in employees
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to the qualification they have acquired from
univeristies
the body of faculty and students at a university
universities
and play an important role in the upbringing of
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company
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the company
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There are many reasons for the
coompanies
an institution created to conduct business
company
companies
to consider social skills in
employee
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the employee
because in todays world of fierce competition only qualifications do not
fullfil
put in effect
fulfil
fulfils
fulfilled
the requirement. One of the most important being communication skills which is essentially required in
marketing
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the marketing
of products and finalizing business deals.
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has become so essential that companies even after employing people, conduct courses of communication skills so that it can be improved
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among
the workers.
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, while giving the final verdict of deals or getting a contract
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the companies ask the employees with
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good
better
comunication
the activity of communicating; the activity of conveying information
communication
communications
skills to give presentations.
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has been seen to help the companies earn the deal or contract. The
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reason for organisations to consider skills is harmony amongst the workers. The
company
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can only be successful if the interpersonal relationship
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amongst
among
the workers is cordial
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their energies will be wasted in pulling
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each others`
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, on
success
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the success
or promotion of one worker, the fellow or
collleague
the body of faculty and students of a college
college
colleges
should be
happy
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happier
rather than crib against his back for using the unfair means.
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environment of harmony will keep all the employees like a family so there are more chances for
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company
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the company
companies
a company
to succeed
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In conclusion, social skills are very important not only for the
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company but
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company, but
for the society as a whole to prosper and flourish.
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