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The percentage of different types of waste recycled

#percentage #waste
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The data sources clearly communicate the proportion of four distinct categories of
waste
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 material which were recycled, namely
glass
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,
paper
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, cans, and
plastic
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 during the spans of 10 years, initiating with 1992 culminating in 2002. Overall, it is patently obvious that there was an appreciable acceleration in the total of recycled
waste
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.
Furthermore
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,
plastic
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waste
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 recycling rates remained relatively steady
over the period given
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over the given period
.
To begin
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 with 1992, the most recycled
waste
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 was
glass
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, roughly 17
percent
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, followed by
paper
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 with 15
percent
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.
Subsequently
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, the figure for both these recycled
waste
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 accelerated considerably in 5 years’ time, roughly 29
percent
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 with
glass
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 and 21
percent
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 with
paper
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, respectively. By the end of the period, the recycling rates of
glass
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 and
paper
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 doubled that of cans and
plastic
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, approximately 40% and 50%, in turn. With respect to the other
waste
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 materials, the number of cans and
plastic
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 reuse in 1992 initiated
at
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on
 9
percent
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 and 10
percent
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, respectively. The figure for cans in 1997 was nearly doubled and continue
stable climb
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the stable climb
 with slightly, about 20
percent
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 in 2020. Meanwhile, the year 1997 witnessed a modest growth of
plastic
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 before
leveling
changing the ground level to a smooth horizontal or gently sloping surface
levelling
 off in 2020, about 12
percent
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.

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