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Some people think that team sports are very important for children to succeed in their career, others disagree? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some people think that formal
education
 should start for children as early as possible. While others think that it should not start until 7 years of
age
.
Education
 is not the filling of a pail, but the lighting of a fire. Some people think that learning in early
age
 is not preferable; others think that it is so beneficial to start learning formal
education
 in the early
age
. The ones who think it is not better to start learning formally before the
age
 of seven find it hard for the young to be involved in
education process
Suggestion
the education process
. They believe that the children should live their normal life with happiness and freedom, without any stress or pressure. They
also
 think that their brains are not ready for getting any kind of formal
education
 before the
age
 of seven. Their suggestion is to have them under supervision of their parents; providing them with
basic level
Suggestion
a basic level
 of learning.
On the other hand
, the ones who think it is more productive to start learning formally deem that the minds of the kids, in
this
age
, is suitable for learning easily. As the kids could imitate anything they
listen
perceive (sound) via the auditory sense
hear
 and see facilely.
Moreover
, they will be developed in social and emotional connections at short notice. Definitely, it will help them in later stages of educational career. In my opinion, to start early formal
education
 for children is the best of all. I feel that children in
this
age
 can be improved expeditiously. Early experiences provide the base for the mind’s supervisory improvement and learning skills throughout life
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