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High stakes English language tests such as IELTS are increasingly being delivered on computer. Do the advantages of computer based testing outweighs the disadvantages.

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In order to ensure that law and justice must prevail, many countries have started
broadcasting public
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broadcasting, public
 hearings on the cable networks. While there are many people who favour
such
 a decision, there are many people who are against
such
 a deed.
This
 essay will discuss the negative and positive aspects of
such
 a system with logical reasons to observe which outweighs the other. The
first
 and foremost advantage of a televised hearing is the transparency that it brings to the masses, as it is not possible for one and all to be
at
Suggestion
on
 the court premises during the proceedings.
In addition
 to
this
,
such
 an activity
also
 helps in increasing the level of legal education amongst the public which in turn increases awareness.
For instance
, people watching legal proceedings can come across many laws which they might be unaware of before and can use the same for their own protection during a mishap.
Nevertheless
,
such
 public hearings can
also
 have a devastating effect on the people who might not be ready to encounter
such
 things in their life.
Broadcast
Suggestion
The broadcast
 of
such
 a show can result in
children adapting
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children, adapting
 inappropriate
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
 they might encounter while watching.
Also
, since the proceedings would be public the jury can feel pressured if they had to vote against what people think as people might form opposite opinions due to lack of legal education.
Such
 pressure can deviate them from making the correct decision. To summarise,
although
 there appears to be an argument against television broadcasting of trials, I firmly believe that
this
 broadcasting of
such
 judicial proceedings can bring tremendous benefits in terms of education purposes,
hence
, it outweighs the former.
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