# You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter -advising them of your situation. -explain how this is affecting you. -request a new card.

Dear Sir/Madam, Hope you are doing good. I am Ankit Rao, my ID: 0175920. I am doing my bachelors in
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Science Department. Recently I have lost my ID batch in the college cafeteria. Because of
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my attendance getting marked as absent.
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, many fraudulent swiping is happening with my card. Yesterday I got a call from the librarian stating that you have collected two books but it wasn't me. She was like, you have to pay
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if you fail to return books by tomorrow morning.
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academics. As I am I sincerely request you to issue the new ID batch for me at the earliest. If you want me to pay any charges, please let me know. I would like to make sure that, no more problems should not repeat
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my name. Please do needful. Your's Faithfully, Ankit.
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