Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Developed nations have to provide assistance for under developing countries to improve the three essential sectors

such

as health, education and trade. It is undoubtedly true that the wealthy countries should provide financial aid for the

third

world countries, but the poor nations

also

have to make an initiative to improve their nations. Aids from wealthy countries is highly essential for under developing nations to make an advancement since many

third

world nations have inadequate financial funding, technology and human resources to

develop

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developing

developed

their nations. Australia,

for instance

, provides scholarships for the younger generation in the under developing countries to pursue higher degrees in universities. The main objective of

this

financial endowment is to improve the quality of human resources in recipient countries so that in years to come the nations will have a well-developed workforce.

As a result

, the poor countries will have a sufficient number of people who are able to contribute to their nation's developments and raise their nation prosperities.

However

,

this

does not mean that the under developing nation should only rely on international reliefs due to the fact that these assistants are provided for a limited period. The poor countries have to make an approach to collaborate with other nations to

develop

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developing

developed

their nations. Timor-

leste

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Leste

,

for example

, establishes a partnership with

neighboring

having a common boundary or edge; abutting; touching

neighbouring

countries

such

as Australia and Indonesia to manage their natural resources which revenue can be used to improve infrastructure, health and education sectors.

Consequently

, in a few decades later, they will not only have a well-built

infrastructure but

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infrastructure, but

also

have advancement in other sectors. In conclusion, I agree that modern countries ought to support developing nations to improve the essential sectors in their countries.

However

, I

also

believe that the poor nations have to make long-term planning to make sure the sustainable development in their nations.