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Some people think that people should pay more taxes for various services while other think that it should be minimum, according to desires of public. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #taxes #services #desires
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"Every coin has a two sides"
Tax
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 is a kind of government income.
Paying
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The paying tax amount
The paying Tax amount
Tax
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amount
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 is responsibility
fo
appropriate to; intended for
for
of
 people who are staying or living that province or country. I would like to say to paying
exccesive
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excessive amounts
excessive amount
an excessive amount
amount
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 of
tax
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 is
wealthy
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wealth
 for their present and future.
Other
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Others
 argue that people could pay
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tax
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the tax amount
tax amounts
amount
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 upon their wish or capability. Let's begin with my perspective, Municipality
earn
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earns
tax
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amount
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by
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of
 their local people and that
amount
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wil
the capability of conscious choice and decision and intention
will
 use for governmental infrastructure, facilities, and education. For an example - Developed country requesting more
tax
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 contribution by their people and establish useful medical services
to
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with
 the help of modern technology equipments. If anyone
need
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needs
 an emergency treatment they could
ruin
move fast by using one's feet, with one foot off the ground at any given time
run
 out from His or her pain Let's lights on what other people
says
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say
, people could pay
tax
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 by in desire
amount
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. It would be acceptable at certain step, Suppose, he or she could have enough income which is already short of their livelihood
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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