Some people prefer to provide help and support directly to those in the local community who need it. Others, however, prefer to give money to national and international charitable organisations. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

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I believe that helping others in any way is always virtuous thing. There are two ways of helping others: aiding people directly who are closer to you or globally through charity organisations. In
this
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essay I will try to discuss
benefits
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the benefits
of both approaches. There are many advantages of direct help.
For
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example you
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example, you
will be available to see how is your money being spent and what people are being benefited from your charity.
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, people will be informed who
are receiving
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is receiving
the aid by who are they being supported.
Thus
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, you can gain the respect and
honor
bestow honor or rewards upon
honour
,
furthermore
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, self-satisfaction after you see how you made brighter changes
to
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in
people's life which may lead you to do more positive actions in the future. Of course it is
also
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advantageous if you support people through global charity organisations.
This
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way you can give your hand to others with larger platforms. Which means,
your
second person pronoun; the person addressed
you
help spread better places who really needed. In
this
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approach support that you can
aiming
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aim
to do, doesn't have to be
with
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in
the form of
money
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money, instead you
instead
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you can voluntarily help with others things that you are skilled with.
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instance doctors
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instance, doctors
could help to the countries when they need more doctors to help diseases like
Coronavirus which
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Coronavirus, which
have been spreading recently around the world. In the end, any type of help is beneficial.
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, it is better to help people around you if you
live
go away from a place
leave
the country which is developing, on the opposite, it might be much beneficial helping through international charities.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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