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Many people say that the only way to guarantee getting a good job is to complete a university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work? discuss your opinion.

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It is
also
 a common idea among people who say that it is better to get a
university
degree
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degree, then
then
 go and search for
job
 opportunities,
on the other hand
, there is an opposite opinion that says we should start working just after school graduation. In
this
 essay, we will consider both ideas and try to explain the benefit and harm of each idea. At
first
, I consider the idea that says we should get a
university
degree
. In that case, you have four or three years to study in the field you interested in and try to achieve more academic experience.
furthermore
in addition
Furthermore
, there
is
Suggestion
are
 so many
job
offer
Suggestion
offers
 for a
university
 graduate student that has more academic skills.
For instance
, if you look around for successful people you can find so many examples like Mark Zuckerberg (the CEO of Facebook) who had completed his bachelor's
degree
 at Harvard
University
 and
then
 with a group of his friends he made a billion-dollar company.
On the other hand
, some people claim that it is a more efficient way to go immediately after high school education and find a
job
. In most cases you should
first
 learn some practical
skills
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skills, therefore
therefore
, you have to wait for a year to start your career.
Although
 it has its own benefit because if you start your
job career
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job, career
 sooner you can get more experience and find your
favorite
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
 field much quicker.
In addition
, you can make money as soon as you find a
job
.
For example
, Steve jobs have a quit interesting life history because he had started his career in the garage beneath his old
house
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house, then
then
 he found out what he capable of
then
 he made his company. In conclusion, we can say whether you choose to get a
university
degree
 or not you should have a clear plan and stick to it to find your desired
job
.
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