You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter: • explain your situation • describe your problems • tell him/her when you think you can move in

Dear

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Smith, As per the rental agreement between us, it was accepted that

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I will be moving into your apartment on the 29th February 2020 and due to an unexpected illness, we will have to extend my stipulated date of entry into your flat. As you are aware that, I work in

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food industry and unexpectedly,

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Friday during production hours met with a minor injury that resulted in a hairline fracture in my left arm.

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, after treatment, the doctor advised

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to lay stress over the injury, which is why

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I have taken 2 weeks off from work and

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is restricting me to move into your flat on the stipulated date. I hereby request

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, if you can kindly amend the rental agreement and update my entry date to 14th March 2020.

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would not only give me recovery time but

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ample time to collect and pack my belongings. I hope

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would not cause any difficulties. Yours Sincerely, Vishwa.