You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter: • explain your situation • describe your problems • tell him/her when you think you can move in

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Smith, As per the rental agreement between us, it was accepted that

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I will be moving into your apartment on the 29th February 2020 and due to an unexpected illness, we will have to extend my stipulated date of entry into your flat. As you are aware that, I work in

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food industry and unexpectedly,

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Friday during production hours met with a minor injury that resulted in a hairline fracture in my left arm.

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, after treatment, the doctor advised

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to lay stress over the injury, which is why

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I have taken 2 weeks off from work and

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is restricting me to move into your flat on the stipulated date. I hereby request

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, if you can kindly amend the rental agreement and update my entry date to 14th March 2020.

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would not only give me recovery time but

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ample time to collect and pack my belongings. I hope

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would not cause any difficulties. Yours Sincerely, Vishwa.

Thu Feb 13 2020

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter: • explain your situation • describe your problems • tell him/her when you think you can move in

Global warming is one if the most serious issues that the world is facing today.

Many people argu that in order to improve educational quality, high school students are encouraged to make comments or even criticism on their teachers. Other think it will lead to loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your Opinion.

The best way to improve health is to exercise daily. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Today, many people do not know their neighbors. Why is this happening? What can be done about this?