You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen. But it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken. Write a letter to shop manager. In your letter Describe the problem with the equipment Explain what happened when you phoned the shop Say what you would like the manager to do

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Dear Sir, I am writing to let you know that I bought a pressure cooker from your shop almost 2 days ago. When I decided to use
this
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apparatus to make some food for my hubby
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, I found there is an issue at the upper side of the kitchen article. Means its evaporation section had not worked properly.
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, it’s
very
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essential part to cook delicious food. I am sure you provide a solution
,
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when I let you know what happened when I call to shop to sort out the earlier mentioned problem. You know what? Your shop seller behaviour is very poor toward the customer. When I told him about
kitchen
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the kitchen
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accessory problem on call
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he responds like he did not know much about it. Even though, he has not given me a proper time to tell him my queries. He said in
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manner, I have no time, I call you back when I am free and after
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he does not call me back. I would like to tell
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the manger
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manger
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manager
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to sort out my equipment issue or replaced it
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a new one. I would
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suggest him to give proper training to your shopkeepers about equipment’s and tell them how to guide the customers on call? Thank you for
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