You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen. But it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken. Write a letter to shop manager. In your letter Describe the problem with the equipment Explain what happened when you phoned the shop Say what you would like the manager to do

Dear Sir, I am writing to let you know that I bought a pressure cooker from your shop almost 2 days ago. When I decided to use

this

apparatus to make some food for my hubby

then

, I found there is an issue at the upper side of the kitchen article. Means its evaporation section had not worked properly.

However

, it’s

very

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essential part to cook delicious food. I am sure you provide a solution

,

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apply

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when I let you know what happened when I call to shop to sort out the earlier mentioned problem. You know what? Your shop seller behaviour is very poor toward the customer. When I told him about

kitchen

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the kitchen

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accessory problem on call

then

he responds like he did not know much about it. Even though, he has not given me a proper time to tell him my queries. He said in

bad

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a bad

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manner, I have no time, I call you back when I am free and after

that

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,that

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he does not call me back. I would like to tell

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the manger

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manger

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manager

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to sort out my equipment issue or replaced it

by

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with

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a new one. I would

also

suggest him to give proper training to your shopkeepers about equipment’s and tell them how to guide the customers on call? Thank you for

co-operation

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your co-operation

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Tayyab Hussain