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Some people feel that paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

#people #paparazzi #celebrities #privacy #pictures #price #fame
Being a
celebrity
 or superstar, it is not easy for them to go anywhere and enjoy freely like a common person. Every individual has a dream for gaining popularity and become a
well
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good
 person
globally but
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globally, but
 as a superstar it is not an easy for them to hide and enjoy comfortably anywhere
instead
 paparazzi
wondering
migratory
wandering
 everywhere and follow them. According to some people they
should not be follow
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should not be followed
 and let them enjoy privacy but some are thinking it is
price
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the price
 of fame so they have to pay. Indeed,
celebrity
 are human and every person
have
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has
 a right to keep privacy and enjoy the
life
. More interference of photographers disturbs the private
life
 of celebrities.
Furthermore
, follow everywhere to celebrities and getting photos not giving comfortable zone for enjoying the little moments
to
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with
 them. Apart from that, reveal every moment or photos in public sometimes reveal some secrets which they don’t want to share instantly.
However
, they are
public figure
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public figures
a public figure
 and gaining popularity of any
celebrity
 make more curious to fans or audience for knowing them each and everything in daily
life
. To be precise,
celebrity
want
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wants
 more attention of audience towards them so they can keep popularity stable and fans are always curious to capture their
celebrity
 moments so it is
price
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the price
 of fame they have to handle
this
. To summarize, celebrities are making efforts to entertain audience and connect them. But
celebrity
 is not private property so they can be disturbing anytime.
For
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To
 keep enjoying private
life
to
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of
 our celebrities is a good way to treat them.
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