The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Agree or disagree?

#growth #shops #towns #cities

In the era of technology advancement online shopping trend is growing rapidly, online shopping stores have lesser chances to survive longer in the market due to consumer taste changes and their demand are not constant.

However some

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However, some

argues

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argue

that

this

will lead to closing the shops in cities and town.

Firstly

online shopping stores provide huge discounts and promotions on their products to attract more consumers because they don’t need to pay

huge rental amount

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a huge rental amount

or maintenance cost for their physical location which will results the online products are available on low prices as compare to shops.

Secondly online

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Secondly, online

stores have range of

variety

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variation

of any product which provides many choices

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for

their consumers to select as per their need and wants just by browsing at your bed and they don’t need to go physically to buy products which

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are

beneficial for busy people. On

another hand

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the other hand, this

the other hand this

other hand this

this

online shopping

stores

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store

are not satisfying

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is not satisfying

for all the consumers due to

such

need and wants of consumers won’t purchase anything without checking their items physically due to many reasons.

Moreover online

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Moreover, online

shopping is not reliable all the time some time you don’t get the same product as you ordered online

therefore

the physical existence of shops for shopping always be there. In my country

daraz

take upon oneself; act presumptuously, without permission

dares

dress

doors

online shopping are commonly not providing

same item

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the same item

ordered received

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ordered, received

from consumers in which results the goodwill of online shopping effected.

Fri Feb 14 2020

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

Nowadays, many people use the Internet to get medical advice instead of going to see a doctor. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Millions of dollars are spent on space research every year. Some people argue that the money should be spent on improving living standards on Earth. Do you agree or disagree ?

Today there is a great increase in antisocial personal behavior such as committing a crime. What are the causes of this? Who should be responsible for this problem? (crime)