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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Music
 plays a pivotal role in the identity of every culture. Regarding to
this
, people proclaim that,
music
 is the best way of gathering individuals of various traditions and generations together. In my opinion, I completely agree with
this
 statement. My position is argued
further
, with
relevant example
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relevant examples
a relevant example
. To
Initate
bring into being
initiate
imitate
,
music
 is the soul of various
launuages
the descendants of one individual
lineages
lungs
 and it can develop a bond of unity
in
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with
 the people of dissimilar customs. A good example for
this
 is that, one Spanish song,
despacito
.
Although
, it is in the
spanish
the Romance language spoken in most of Spain and the countries colonized by Spain
Spanish
 language, it achieves appreciation and
gains
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gain
 millions of like from many countries.
Consequently
, a large number of people unfamiliar with
spanish language
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the Spanish language
Spanish language
, but due to
despacito
 song people
frome
a giver or sender
from
 different countries are starting to learn Spanish language.
Furthermore
, currently due to globalisation, fusion versions of
song
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the song
 is becoming very popular and some songs
are translating
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are translated
 into the local languages.
Hence
, it can break boundaries of cultures separation and make people able to live in the harmony.
Additionally
, nowadays the
music
 directors remake the old songs
into
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in
 the current trending
music
 styles.
Therefore
, elder people can
also
 enjoy
old songs
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the old songs
in
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with
 the new version as well as it can decrease the generation gap among different age of persons.
On the contrary
, there are some people, who are
the great
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the greatest
 fan of classical
music
. As a consequence, they do not want to
listen western
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listen to western
music
.
In addition
 to
this
, some people believe that
music
 is not a better way
inspite
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in spite
 of that, authorities from different nations should arrange international sports competitions,
insternational
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international
 dance festival and so on.
To
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In
 gist, it is true that,
music
. Can fill the space of detachment between different cultures to a large extent and can spread a sense of living in
armony
compatibility in opinion and action
harmony
 among people
at
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on
 a global stage.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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