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Some people prefer to shop for food in supermarkets. Other people prefer to do their food shopping online. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some people prefer going to the
super market
a large self-service grocery store selling groceries and dairy products and household goods
supermarket
 and buy
grocerries
a marketplace where groceries are sold
groceries
 while some
poeple
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
 like to stay at home and shop online. Both groups have their own advantages and disadvantages.
Shopping offline
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Shopping, offline
 or online could be hard for some people depending on their needs or personalities. People who prefer online shopping usually argue that; online shopping is safe and easy, they can do it anywhere. They
dont
do not
don't
 have to get up or go to the
store
 to buy something when they can do it over their phone while being in their personal space. People who suffer from autism might find online shopping better because they do not like to be in a different situation or a new situation. People
now a days
the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
nowadays
 are more anxious than before and
thet
pointing out something
that
they
 prefer staying in their own house rather than going out because for some people outside is not safe
sucha
to so extreme a degree
such
 as people with anxiety, introvert or autistic kids. So, to be
safe they
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safe, they
 can just stay inside four walls and order online whatever they want or need. It is all about confidence and how they
precieve
to become aware of through the senses
perceive
preserve
 a world. Now a days there are a lot of crime on the street you can get robbed or mugged if you go out with cash for shopping. Another reason why online shopping is becoming big day by day is because of the electronics and the speed the world is changing so fast and people are getting
more busy
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busier
 and they do not have
time
 to take out from their life to go to the supermarket. Jobs and studies are hard and because of that by the
time
 they are free and feel exhausted and because of that they prefer online shopping.
However on
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However, on
 the other side people who believe it is better to go to the
store
 to buy things, it is because they believe that when you are physically present in the
store you
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store, you
 can see and feel the thing, whereas
this
 is something you
can not
can not
cannot
 do online. When you can see the item by
yourself you
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yourself, you
caan
able to
can
cant
 get a good insight about the product
for example
 a clothing article, if you wear it you can know whether it suits you or is it your style or not, if
its
it is
it's
 not you can always look for another article in the
store
. When you are buying things in
supermarket
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the supermarket
a supermarket
 you are doing
excersie
the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercise
 as well which is good for your health because you are walking while looking for the things you need. Extrovert people find shopping
ofline
on a regular route of a railroad or bus or airline system
online
off-line
 good because it gives them a chance to interact with other people and to get to know
about things better,
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better about things,
 because you can feel and know about the thing. In my opinion, online shopping is better because we all believe that
time
 is money and online shopping does not take a lot of
time
 it just happens in seconds where as going out and buy takes up a lot of
time
, at the end of the day if you do not like your item you can always return it and get it replaced,

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