Some people prefer to shop for food in supermarkets. Other people prefer to do their food shopping online. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people prefer going to the
super market
and buy a large self-service grocery store selling groceries and dairy products and household goods
supermarket
grocerries
while some a marketplace where groceries are sold
groceries
poeple
like to stay at home and shop online. Both groups have their own advantages and disadvantages. (plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
Shopping offline
or online could be hard for some people depending on their needs or personalities.
People who prefer online shopping usually argue that; online shopping is safe and easy, they can do it anywhere. They Accept comma addition
Shopping, offline
dont
have to get up or go to the do not
don't
store
to buy something when they can do it over their phone while being in their personal space. People who suffer from autism might find online shopping better because they do not like to be in a different situation or a new situation. People Use synonyms
now a days
are more anxious than before and the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
nowadays
thet
prefer staying in their own house rather than going out because for some people outside is not safe pointing out something
that
they
sucha
as people with anxiety, introvert or autistic kids. So, to be to so extreme a degree
such
safe they
can just stay inside four walls and order online whatever they want or need. It is all about confidence and how they Accept comma addition
safe, they
precieve
a world. Now a days there are a lot of crime on the street you can get robbed or mugged if you go out with cash for shopping. Another reason why online shopping is becoming big day by day is because of the electronics and the speed the world is changing so fast and people are getting to become aware of through the senses
perceive
preserve
more busy
and they do not have Suggestion
busier
time
to take out from their life to go to the supermarket. Jobs and studies are hard and because of that by the Use synonyms
time
they are free and feel exhausted and because of that they prefer online shopping.
Use synonyms
Linking Words
However on
the other side people who believe it is better to go to the Accept comma addition
However, on
store
to buy things, it is because they believe that when you are physically present in the Use synonyms
Use synonyms
store you
can see and feel the thing, whereas Accept comma addition
store, you
this
is something you Linking Words
can not
do online. When you can see the item by can not
cannot
yourself you
Accept comma addition
yourself, you
caan
get a good insight about the product able to
can
cant
for example
a clothing article, if you wear it you can know whether it suits you or is it your style or not, if Linking Words
its
not you can always look for another article in the it is
it's
store
. When you are buying things in Use synonyms
supermarket
you are doing Suggestion
the supermarket
a supermarket
excersie
as well which is good for your health because you are walking while looking for the things you need. Extrovert people find shopping the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercise
ofline
good because it gives them a chance to interact with other people and to get to know on a regular route of a railroad or bus or airline system
online
off-line
about things better,
because you can feel and know about the thing.
In my opinion, online shopping is better because we all believe that Suggestion
better about things,
time
is money and online shopping does not take a lot of Use synonyms
time
it just happens in seconds where as going out and buy takes up a lot of Use synonyms
time
, at the end of the day if you do not like your item you can always return it and get it replaced,Use synonyms
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