There are many people who go to live in different countries. To what extent should people be allowed to move freely between countries and live where they choose? What are the benefits and drawbacks of this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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The world now has become a global village, people migrate to other countries and spend time in the place of their choice.
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immigration has become very common and it is beneficial in the sense of mixing of cultures and few drawbacks as well. The migrations to different countries is beneficial in the sense that people living in the countries which are afflicted by political unrest are at high risk of losing their lives
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They move to other countries to save their own lives and the life of loved ones.
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, in African countries, people for the sake of survival migrated to other countries in search of better life. If they stayed in the same country, they might have been killed. So, migration to neighbouring or western countries saved their lives.
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movement is beneficial to the
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countries as well, as they receive man power and probably more hardworking and physical strong people
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, people who were brought up in hilly areas always have more reserves
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compared to others and
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can be utilized in a tough
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a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
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nations.
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relocation of individuals is not without drawbacks.
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may create more competition for the employment,
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the number
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may be a source of disharmony in society and hatred against the migrates.
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, in
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the UK similar situation
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decade, when they inducted a large number of international medical graduates, local doctors ran short of the job. So, later on,
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immigration laws were scrutinized.
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, the free movements of individuals in several countries results in problems for
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nations as criminals
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take advantage of free entry and creates problems for them. Pakistan,
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, suffered in the case of Afghanistan war and received a number of displaced Afghanis, who in turn created problems which were witnessed as increased terror attacks in the country. The movement of people should be kept in a check as mass movements of people may create problems for the
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country both economically and socially.
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should be controlled via legislation and visas should be issued after thorough scrutiny. In conclusion, while migration of people has
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benefits, it
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has many drawbacks in the form of unemployment and a balance has to be
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by the nations.
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