Since people are becoming cashless these days,it is believed paper currency and coins will be replated by bank card ? Do you agree or disagree with the statement.

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Now days people feel comfortable with plastic cash like ATM cards people have become cashless as they will
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use paper cash in future. Certainly I agree with his statement.
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, people use ATM cards for online shopping.They pay online for what they want or whatever.They
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save their time.When they pay high amount they pay in just a
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without going anywhere.
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people do not carry high amount.They think
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is also paid
is also paying
has also paid
also pays
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pay urgent suddenly bank are
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close.So
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time people use online transfer money. These are some pros of plastic money.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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