Some people believe that its not necessary to have internet access to live a full life. What is your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience.

The
internet
has changed the way of living of many people, still there is an argument that life can be lived to its
most
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mostly
without the help of
this
technology. In my opinion,
one
can live life for the sake of
living but
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living, but
, cannot reach its limits without the use of the
internet
. Science's most useful invention has influenced human's life immensely and it
can not
can not
cannot
be denied.
Although
,
one
can survive without taking the advantage of technology but, he will be
influced
a power to affect persons or events especially power based on prestige etc
influenced
by its by-products and convenience. Even though,
such
way will be slow and disconnect from the world, with limited source and knowledge. The biggest invention of human kind is the
internet
. Nowadays, people rely on it for long
distances
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distance
communication without wasting time, unlike the
tarditional
consisting of or derived from tradition
traditional
method of the communicating. Sharing of information is possible from
one
side of the world to the other side.
Therefore humans
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Therefore, humans
are able to save time and invest it in a more fruitful manner.
For example
,
one
can easily share information with friends, who is staying miles away without having to travel for long hours and can invest the time in
studing
reading carefully with intent to remember
studying
.
Furthermore
, the
interent
a computer network consisting of a worldwide network of computer networks that use the TCP/IP network protocols to facilitate data transmission and exchange
internet
is
vast source
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a vast source
of information. All are able to benefit from the learnings and knowledge of each other. Resulting in, awareness about various methods of vegetation, medication and cure
to
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for
illeness
impairment of normal physiological function affecting part or all of an organism
illness
etc.
For instance
, I can search online, the
recepies
directions for making something
recipes
of Thai
ciusines
the practice or manner of preparing food or the food so prepared
cuisines
without actually going to Thailand. In Conclusion, in my opinion,
one
can live without
internet but
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internet, but
cannot thrive without it. The thought of
human future
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the human future
without
internet
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the internet
,
itself
the thing named or in question
it
is very scary.
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