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Some people say that a car is the best way to travel in cities while others believe a bicycle is a better way to commute. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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In urban area, people believe that
car
 is the most
prefered
more desirable than another
preferred
 way to
travel but
Accept comma addition
travel, but
 many contradict by stating bicycle to be superior. In my opinion,
bicycle
Suggestion
the bicycle
a bicycle
 is beneficial in terms of health,
enviroment
Suggestion
the environment
environment
 and saving and
car
 can be more damaging to
ones
Suggestion
one's
 health and the nature.
Although
, motor vehicles can be convenient and
siutable
meant or adapted for an occasion or use
suitable
 for
person
Suggestion
people
persons
a person
the person
 who like to live a sedentary lifestyle. For
instanse
an occurrence of something
instance
instances
, people who
wishes
Suggestion
wish
 to move around less by giving difficulty to his body would prefer using
car
Suggestion
cars
a car
the car
. Other options like electronic
car
 could not a viable option as those
car
Suggestion
cars
 a significantly expensive for who wishes to purchase it.
Moreover
, not only, usage of fossil-fuel powered vehicles could impact an individual's saving heavily, but realise harmful gases in the environment.
This
 convenience could
also
 lead to less body movement and
cardivascular
of or pertaining to or involving the heart and blood vessels
cardiovascular
 activities. Which
endanger
Suggestion
endangers
 the
persons
Suggestion
person's
 health and well
bieng
the state or fact of existing
being
.
On the other hand
, usage of bicycle could be physically
inconvenient but
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inconvenient, but
 helps embrace the
enviroment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
 and support persons to gain fitness.
This
muclses
Suggestion
muscle
muscles
nucleus
 powered machine would encourage saving and will never be a reason for road congestions To conclude,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 concur, with the ones who believe a
bicyle
a wheeled vehicle that has two wheels and is moved by foot pedals
bicycle
 to be a better option than a motor vehicle. As it is nature-
frendly
characteristic of or befitting a friend
friendly
 and low budget investment.
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