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Some people think that the government wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?

#people #government #money #arts
The line chart shows the range of
typical
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the typical cost
cost
 of
hydropower
 projects and its evolution with the level of development of the studies evolved. In the
first
 stages of
studies many
Accept comma addition
studies, many
 factors make the estimating of costs less accurate.
This
 is due to the lack of studies which elevates the
uncertain
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uncertainly
 about the project and the environment where it is placed. While studies evolve,
this
 uncertainly is reduced and the same occurs with the risk of making errors when estimating project costs. In the
last
 stages of investigation, the final
cost
 is more precisely calculated and it is very close to the final
cost
. In fact, in the
factibility
 phase, the average difference between the final
cost
 and the estimated
cost
is les
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is less
isles
 tan 25%.
In
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On
 the other hand, in the earliest studies
such
 as "inventory", that difference can reach the 50% in less or more than the final
cost
. In conclusion, for developing hydropower projects it is highly
recommend
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recommended
 to overcome all the stages
thus
 reducing the risk of losing money.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enriching society
  • promoting cultural understanding
  • development of talent
  • creative industries
  • economic benefits
  • generate revenue
  • cultural heritage
  • identity
  • prioritize spending
  • needs of the majority
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