Some people believe that sport is an essential part of school life for children, while others feel it should be purely optional. Discuss these opposing views and give your own opinion.

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Sport helps children to become more strong not only
physically but
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physically, but
also
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mentally;
however
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, some
belives
accept as true; take to be true
believes
believe
that it is
most significant
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more significant
in
school
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curriculum, whilst others
says
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say
it ought to be discretionary. On the one hand,
firstly
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, sports is an essential activity in
school
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since it aid pupils grow more stronger.
Consequently
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, sport
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also build
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also builds
self confidence and along with that, it
also
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built leadership quality inside them.
For instance
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, leading the football team in
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tournament will develop managing skills and communication skills.
Secondly
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,
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,
not every pupil is good at academics
,
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,
so sport provides the wide range of opportunities to
built
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build
their future.
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, people argue that more importance should not be given to sport in
school
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curriculum because it is not much worthy.
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, sports distract pupils to focusing on their academics rather than helping them.
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, In every
school
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sports week is being held so which makes students more involved in sports activities ranging from cricket, tennis to chess.
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,
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,
they
belives
accept as true; take to be true
believe
that they pay
school
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fees for academic education not for extra curricular activities. To illustrate, adding two specific periods of sports in
school
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in
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school timetable
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the school timetable
. To conclude, I think sports
is
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are
a prominent subject in
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school curriculum
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the school curriculum
school curricula
and yet it should be mandatory.
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, there should be some balance between
extra curricular
outside the regular academic curriculum
extracurricular
activities and academics which will
also
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beneficiary to pupils.
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