Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.

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1: Today,

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has become a priority for many parents seeking to secure a good

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for their children in

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rapidly changing world. They believe that if their children apply themselves and work hard at school,

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they will

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their opportunities for going to higher

education

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and eventually getting a good job. Of course, they are right, and as access to the best

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and

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better

jobs

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it is true that children have to make the best of their

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time

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when they are young.

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, the parents who do not allow their children sufficient free

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for

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activities outside school hours are misguided.

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activities are far from being a waste of

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for the children simply because they are not academic. It is important to remember that children need to develop skills other than intellectual ones, and the best way to do

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is through activities

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as sports, games and playing with other kids. If they cannot play make-believe games, how can they develop their imagination? How can they learn physical coordination or learn important social lessons about winning and losing if they do not practise any sports? Many children form strong, personal relationships with the friends they play with, and without the opportunity to do

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, they could grow up emotionally immature or unformed.

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important to remember that, children need to relax as well as work. If everything they do must have some educational or academic relevance,

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they will soon get tired of studying altogether, which is the

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2: The manner in which children spent their free

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varies greatly from

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to another. It is argued that pupils should be involved in tasks which are related to

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period.

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, I believe that utilising spare

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physical activities and watching television will help recuperate their health and concentration.

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with, young people are required to perform body movements for improving their physical abilities. A good illustration for

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is the activity planned in the school timetable which always include some periods dedicated to sports.

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, they are forced to get involved in the activities which require motion resulting in maintaining their fitness level.

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, it is apparent that doing

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exercises will contribute towards the physical development of a child.

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, continuous focus towards studies can result in the problems related to the concentration.

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, if a student is asked to perform an educational task in his extra

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, there are chances that he might start feeling frustrated with studies.

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, if he utilises

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span for watching television, he can feel relaxed

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and, thereby

, he will be more attentive when he starts learning again.

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, it is obvious that

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breaks will help them to enhance the attention level. In conclusion, getting engrossed in activities other than

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not only helps to improve the health but

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fosters the mental fitness.

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,

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clearly debunks the idea that pupils should only perform tasks which aim towards the acquisition of

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in order to avoid wasting

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. It is expected that parents will be made aware of the advantages of spending free moments doing other tasks for the children in the foreseeable

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3: In the past, children had more

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time

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to do various types of activities

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as playing games, walking in the parks and gossiping with others. But, now they have no free

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due to the fact that

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world is becoming more competitive in terms of educational activities. While I cogitate that

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policy has some benefits, I believe that children should allow using their free

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, and it has more advantages. On the

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hand, there are some effective conveniences to the student life when they will occupy with

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of wasting

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by playing, walking, and gossiping.

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, by spending

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with educational activities is

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of the significant trends because students can

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their

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with

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habit.

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could result immense advantages to the students whenever they will confront their

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life.

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, in some countries, it is not easy to get admitted in colleges or universities without sound academic results. So students who want to be a part of tertiary

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in these countries need to learn whenever they get any

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.

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, many countries like Sudan have few

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universities, although

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they have a vast number of students. From the above explanation, it is apparent that children should utilise their

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properly.

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, it can be argued why kids require free

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to spend their own ways.

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important point is that the children, who expend their

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time

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with play and other extracurricular activities, they can improve their mental as well as physical growth. As an

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, if the students play cricket and football, they can learn leadership, responsibility, and so on. Another important point is that the practical

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of the students will

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if they involve with some extracurricular activities. As an

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, many famous scientists like Einstein was always engaging

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extracurricular activities rather than studying.

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makes it explicit that children should permit to use free

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in order to

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their intelligence. In conclusion, it is

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consequential, that

children need to play

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the

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in order to

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their basic

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. I deem that students should bestow some free

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to use their own way that would be augmented to their bright

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4: Children should spend quality

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in

extra curricular

outside the regular academic curriculum

extracurricular

activities apart from the

study

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. Some people think that

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activities must include educational programs while some

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others, including

me, think that we do not require mixing up

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with

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activities. According to some people, if children have to learn faster and efficiently, they should include some educational programs as part of their extra activities. They think that by keeping them busy in

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kind of activities we can help improving their skills and students become more active in their studies. As per my opinion, we should draw a line between the student's

education

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and his extra activities. Both of them should not be mixed up. Students nowadays have lengthy course work to

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entire year. They hardly manage

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for their extra activities and so if we include educational activities as part of their

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activities

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they may feel bored. They

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require changes in their

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it is possible to make them refreshed and relaxed. I think that it

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helps to improve their skills that actually require for their educational programs.

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, engaging children in activities like singing, dancing, painting etc.

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their thinking power and creativity. By participating in these types of activities, students can know their inner ability and strength.

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, some of the physical activities like sports and exercise keep them fit and healthy and help them to maintain their physical strength.

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examples I want to mention is the summer camp. In summer camps, mostly children explore different sports and creative activities that actually

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their self-confidence and keep them relaxed and cool. To draw the conclusion, we should not force children to engage in the

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activities which we want them to do. Let them decide on their

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own, which

activities suit them most.