the map below shows the changes that have been take place in a seaside area since 1995

the map below shows the changes that have been take place in a seaside area since 1995
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The two maps illustrate the main changes which have taken place in a seaside region since 1995.
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,
it is clear that
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the region experienced significant housing development, becoming more densely populated and modernized. The farmland
which
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situated
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is situated
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on the northeast
side
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no longer exists and
forest
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the forest
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park was deforested,
this
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area is dominated by a
tennis-court
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tennis court
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.
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Also
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the housing area which
located
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on
the
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both
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side
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sides
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of the main road was enlarged and extended new way which connected to the main road line.One more visible change is that shop and fish market which
located
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are located
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to
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on
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the
westsouth
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west-south
west south
side
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has
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been turned into
the
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restaurants and apartments respectively.
Additioanally
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Additionally
, the fishing port was demolished.
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, the other facilities remain unchanged.The hotel and cafe to the southeast
side
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stil
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still
stand and near
hotel
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the hotel
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was constructed new parking area.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words side with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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