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nowadays, the trend of eating ready-made food is increasing. Is readymade food beneficial or not?

#trend #food #readymade
Issues related to
readymade
made for purchase and immediate use
ready-made
food
 are frequently discussed these days. Growing concerns are becoming
heated question
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a heated question
 among people that whether it is beneficial or not, which will be discussed in
this
 dissertation before reaching at any conclusion. As fas as the matter is concerned, some people consider
readymade
made for purchase and immediate use
ready-made
food
 advantageous for them because it saves their time. As we are living in a fast paced era, everyone is running a rat race to earn a pool of money which disables them to get some time for cooking. Here,
readymade
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ready made
food
 works as
savior
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Savior
Saviour
.
This
 type of
food
is mostly being consumed
Suggestion
has mostly been consumed
 by students and employees who live far away from their family and do not have anyone to help them to prepare
food
. So, it becomes an intricate task for them to do all tasks
singlehandedly
without assistance
single-handedly
. As every matter has two aspects, another aspect of
this
 matter deals with its opposite side. Some multitude are not in the favour of eating packaged or frozen
food
 because they opine that
this
 type of
food
 is deleterious for health. I
also
second
this
 opinion as
this
 type of
food
 contains plenty of chemicals and preservatives to increase its shelf
time but
Accept comma addition
time, but
 these chemicals put detrimental impact on human body and makes our body prone to many ailments. Apart from
this
, the nutritional value of
readymade
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ready made
food
 is
also
 lower than that of fresh
food
 which compels
masses
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the masses
 to take additional supplements which
further
 have side effects on
body
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the body
. After cogitating on a great deal of thoughts and discussion, the conclusion to be drawn here is that eating packaged
food
 is like opening a Pandora's box unleashing a torrent of potential evils with a little seed of goodwill and hope.

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