In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

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In a decade or two, the population has exploded in extreme bad way. Due to
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, there is meagre space to live and construction of new houses is crucially needed. The only zone which is left out for making building at outskirt. Few individuals hold views to protect the countryside while others want to make living location outside the city. In my opinion, I agree with the latter said the statement.
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and foremost, People remained in a scanty place to live as the population is increasing drastically. Houses are overcrowded and quality of living is decreasing very rapidly. So the only solution is making homes in the countryside.
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is possible, even without damaging an agricultural land.
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, There is a colossal land which remain barren and not of much use for growing crops.
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areas can be overlooked and new building can be established.
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, it becomes senseless to preserve certain landmarks and not using it when we are so short of living space. Rural land definitely presents a heritage value of our ancestors, but the need of time is saving the populace and constructing homes away from cities. We can demarcate valuable properties and make new homes and
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use space which is already dilapidated and renovate those places.
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, In the village, There are houses where no one lives and people have mitigated to cities. These spaces can be used to make homes. To wrap up, the individuals will have opinions which will be opposed by many, but for me, constructing building at rural is absolutely alright, we live on
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planet "Earth" and we have right to live freely in fresh Air, but we should not hamper the Environment in any way.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urbanization
  • Ecological benefits
  • Biodiversity conservation
  • Carbon sequestration
  • Sustainable development
  • Eco-friendly building materials
  • Green architecture
  • Government policies
  • Urban sprawl
  • Infrastructure
  • Smart planning
  • Agricultural lands
  • Rural areas
  • Population growth
  • Environmental sensitivity
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